Re: release the hounds...

by "Susan Daniels" <susandaniels(at)hotmail.com>

Date:	Sun, 21 Mar 1999 09:33:17 PST
To:	burtthemime(at)geocities.com, hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
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> I've done a redesign of http://home.att.net/~kocoa/ and would like 

Burt,

First of all, it took almost a minute at my connection of almost 50K. 
However, I like the look of the site. The font is nice, colors are 
great. Nice mouseovers and easy-to-follow navigation. And the photos are 
really nice color-wise--very bright on my screen!

A couple of points, though:
1. The "Kocoa's Kitchen, Inc" graphic at the top needs a couple of 
pixels of purple between the bottom edge of the comma, and the white 
frame. Currently they run together.

2. the counter-- the first thing a counter makes me think is 
"amateurish". No one needs to know how many hits you're getting--except 
you and your customer. Use stats that the viewer doesn't see.

3. WGN graphic needs height and width tags.

4. AFTRA graphic-- I don't think the animation adds anything, except 
distraction.

So that's it! You've done a good job.

IE4.0, Win95, 1024x768, 32bit color
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