Re: Please critique first frames

Well the best advice I can use is don't use frames unless it's 100%
necessary, but I don't think that's what you wanna hear so here we
go...

-only half of the picture in top right frame is visible.. it starts low,
and is too high for the frame.  
-same with the top left.
-did you do that stuff in 'my favorites'?  i think so- but i honestly
don't see how those  can be  so good but the site design be a cliche'.
-cut the borders and such down so you don't have any horizontal scroll
bars
-good job with the email forms and no 'surprise' email links
-trying to be 'gentle', overall it's a boring design and poor layout but
you look like you can offer some interesting art work to this site once
you get your feet off the ground (judging by 'my favorites')- try to
merge that tallent into the design also

ie 4.o, 16bit color, blah blah
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