Re: Critique please

What the other guy said is true.  It looks plain ol'
"dull."  I guess that is a non-professional critique
so I'll give you some pointers to make your page
better:

1)  Don't center everything:  you center something
mostly when you want to highlight a section.
2)  Use a solid color for a background:  backgrounds
like the one you have are for personal pages.  You
want your page to look as professional as possible.
3)  Use different font colors:  change the color of
the links.  It just looks like text you want to
highlight.  Also, the font color would probably look
better if it were slightly different from the logo.
4)  The page is user-unfriendly:  the way to navigate
the site is horrible.  I know there are no other pages
yet but there will be, so try to use a better
navigation aid than just links in the bottom.
5)  Show your skills:  the company's purpose is to
help people have a homepage, you have to show them a
page as fancy as possible.  I mean I wouldn't go with
your services with that crappy (very unprofessional
word) page.  I would want something good.  So show
your highest skills, but DO NOT overload the page with
dozens of JavaScripts or DHTML animations or something
(if you know how).  And simply state what languages
you know.

Well I hope this helps.




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Regards,
Felipe Delgado
feliped(at)yahoo.com
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http://www.angelfire.com/co/FelipePage/

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