Re: one more time

by Julie Cooke <skyamese2(at)yahoo.com>

 Date:  Mon, 18 Oct 1999 07:26:53 -0700 (PDT)
 To:  hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
 Cc:  marphil(at)radcad.net
  todo: View Thread, Original
Hi, Marci!

I admire your perserverance. Hang in there! :-)

1]The blue lines in the top frame are a bit thick. 
The bottom one in particular tends to stop my eye from
naturally progressing down the page.  Try making them
thinner or perhaps remove the bottom line altogether.

2]The image you use is nice looking but at first
glance, it makes me think that you're an interior
decoration service, which is a little misleading.

3]For each menu item, you should make the button red
or some other contrasting color to indicate which page
the user is currently viewing. For instance, I did not
realize that I was already on the Goals page until I
clicked on the Goals button and nothing happened.  

4]You need to keep your top and the left margins
consistent so your button and positions don't dance
around.  Remember that IE and Netscape have different
margin defaults and attributes so you should put this
in your body tag (x= whatever size you want your
margin to be):

BODY topmargin="x" leftmargin="x" marginheight="x"
marginwidth="x"

5]I won't bug you about anti-aliasing your button
text, since you already know it's an issue. <grin>

Good luck with your design!!

Julie Cooke
Capitol College
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