My SECOND critique

First, I would like to thank all of you for the helpful advice the first time
I went through this, and I hope that you all help just as much this time. my
site is 

http://www.geocities.com/SouthBeach/Shores/3160

I want help with my actual page, NOT HTML PLEASE! I can figure that much out
on my own. I don't use netscape unless I'm at school, so please let me know if
anything is wrong that could be a cross-browser problem. I will have all my
photo's converted to .gifs and thumbnails added, so don't worry about tellin'
me all about that. Thanks, and I hope I'm not picky, I just don't want to have
you waste your time. Thanks AGAIN, and enjoy my site!!

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