Re: Give me a little advice, please
by Shdowrks <Shdowrks(at)aol.com>
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Mon, 23 Mar 1998 16:05:24 EST |
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Heath272(at)aol.com |
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hwg-critique(at)hwg.org |
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In the same vein as other critiques posted, it took awhile before I got to the
"meat" of the site. I would say scrap the entrance page all together and start
with the second one. The advertising definitely dominates the pages. Those
links may work better at the bottom of the page, or on a seperate page all
together.
You invited me to give you feedback and to bookmark the page before I ever
found out what the site was about. This might work better near the "exit".
I went to "personal beliefs" and "sports" (go braves!) but there were no links
on these pages to other pages. Reloading the original page each time gets old
quick.
In short, this site could use a little scaling down, focus, and more
navigation links on the pages.
Good luck,
EA
shdowrks(at)aol.com
www.shadoworks.com
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