Banner Ad Critique - Reply CR20

by "K. David Marple" <opossum(at)rocketmail.com>

Date:	Tue, 4 Jan 2000 02:14:24 -0800 (PST)
To:	nick(at)nickselby.com, HWG Critique <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
	todo: View Thread, Original

Howdy,

Checked it out and I wish my first attempt will be as
good.

Two things: The first time I saw the red climber I it
went by so fast I wasn't sure what it was.  However,
the next cycle I figured it out.

On the Site Specific banner the frame(s) between the
long line and the www.siteaddress.com went by so fast
after watching it for 3 or 4 cycles I still wasn't
sure what it said.

IE 5.5 1024 X 768 16 bit color

--- Nick Selby <nick(at)nickselby.com> wrote:
> First attempt at a banner ad, could I have some
> criticism? The ad is for an 
> adventure travel publisher and will appear on sites
> selling gear, like 
> backpacks and the like. It's 20.k - I understand I'm
> supposed to make it 15K 
> for some reason......Anyway it's a first attempt. 
> 
> http://www.nickselby.com/trailblazer/
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> _____________________________
> Nick Selby
> Aviation, Travel and Technology writer
> www.nickselby.com
> 

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