Re: crit: parksroyalcleaners.com

Great job Tom. I like the purple color, the mouseovers and the helpful tips 
on dry cleaning.

My only suggestion is can you obtain or create a different photograph 
instead of the storefront?  How about the owner standing at the counter 
where persons are helped.  Or showing a row of cleaned press clothes hanging 
on a rack.  Or a close up on something difficult to dry clean like a wedding 
dress or something after it has been cleaned (providing the owner of the 
clothes doesn't mind).

Again great job.

Regards,
Susan


>From: WebSyntaxDesign(at)aol.com
>To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
>Subject: crit: parksroyalcleaners.com
>Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2000 23:15:26 EDT
>
>Hi,
>
>I would appreciate it if you would critique the website at
>http://www.parksroyalcleaners.com/ from a color and design standpoint, as
>well as compatibility with different browsers and platforms.  Any 
>suggestions
>for improvement would be greatly appreciated!
>
>Thanks,
>Tom
>websyntax.com

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