Re: Sorry...URL added
by "Susan Vollmer" <susanvollmer(at)hotmail.com>
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Mon, 31 Jul 2000 18:51:04 CDT |
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smiley(at)sja.net, hwg-critique(at)hwg.org |
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Here are some suggestions:
-- I agree with the previous comment of removing the doctor cartoon graphic.
-- Great job on the mouseovers with the text in the center.
-- Profesional is mispelled under your logo; it should be professional.
-- Remove the "amp" from your alt tag on the main logo.
-- Place your email address on a separate line so it doesn't break midway,
as it did on my screen.
-- On the inside pages, consider adding more space between the left-hand
column, and the main text part.
Good start.
Regards,
Susan V.
http://www.fallenmartyrs.com
viewed with I.E. 5.0
on an IBM laptop
Windows '95
>From: "Dave Price" <smiley(at)sja.net>
>Reply-To: "Dave Price" <smiley(at)sja.net>
>To: "hwg-critique" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
>Subject: Sorry...URL added
>Date: Mon, 31 Jul 2000 12:27:40 -0700
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>I suppose a url would help.....
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>http://www.smileyweb.com/NS2/
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>Hi Everyone...
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>I would like a critique of a redesign I am in the process of. In
>particular,
>I am looking for load times, ect for the main page, and the 2 linked pages
>which are active. Please check "Services" and "Profiles", and the first
>partner listed, Rick Scott is active as well.
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>Understand this is only the first draft to see how it all will come
>together
>and there is much work to be done.
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>Thanks to all in advance.
>
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