Re: My Site (www.kaymaster.com)

1.  There is absolutely nothing wrong with making a viewer guess or figure
things out for themselves.
2.  I don't know many people who turn off the television when assaulted by
yet another Who song cut into 10 second pieces for commercials.

Problem 1 - You can only take chances if the base is solid.  Check your
spelling.  ( eg: your screwed should be you're screwed )
Problem 2 - The chances you are taking have already been taken.

Other then that, your site suggests that you're quite happy with the way it
is.  If you're really not, make a list of what you'd like to accomplish
before you begin.  This looks as if it was done on the fly.  That should
point you in the right direction.

Quinn




> > I am a begginner at site design. Please critique is for me and see what
I
> > can do for it to be better. :) Thanks. The URL is
http://www.kaymaster.com
>
> 1. Design
> 2. Content
>
> This is the basis for any website and unfortunately, this one doesn't seem
> to have either.
>
> You don't really want to make people guess at things, especially how to
> access your site.  I had to look at the source code to see that there was
a
> tiny character in the middle of a black screen.  I assumed that it should
be
> clicked to go to the next page and was immediately assaulted by music.
No,
> no, no.  And another black screen.  As soon as the music started, I was
out
> of there.  Sorry.
>
> Perhaps you should study some design tutorials or articles and decide what
> you want your site to accomplish.  Fill it with content that meets that
> goal, and then submit for another critique.
>
> Good luck.
>
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> Karin Ransdell  kransdell(at)squishedmosquito.com
> Escapade Development Team
> Squished Mosquito, Inc.
> http://www.squishedmosquito.com  or  http://www.escapade.org
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>
>

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