Re: Appropriate whipping

by Shdowrks(at)aol.com

 Date:  Wed, 26 Aug 1998 03:15:42 EDT
 To:  eddieww(at)hotmail.com
 Cc:  hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
  todo: View Thread, Original

> http://www.appwebsite.com

Nice looking, clean, well organized site. 

>>>>Really let me have it<<<<

If you insist.

Your site map says:
"descriptions of the pages are included to reduce confusion." _implies_ a
simple minded visitor. Even if they are :) try to stay positive, as in
something like:
"descriptions of the pages are included for easy reference.".

Your "Sample Pages" section starts with a copy of your own design (Example
One), might have more impact to put the different pages first, and end on your
own design. 

The Examples could use links to the Next Example. As it is now, the start page
has to be called back to move on... too many steps.

Good use of bold words within your paragraphs on the Guidelines page.

Didn't read every word, but what I saw read well, made sense.

Would have liked to see simple links at the bottom of the pages. Scrolling
back up to move on wears me out...:)

All in all, well done.

EA
shdowrks(at)aol.com

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