Re: Critique please

URL:  http://fly.to/chsm

A couple of things, generally with navigation. I clicked on the first and
second links and they both refered to the existing page. The third link took
me to an exit, just a little too soon. The fourth link (breakaway) took me to
a new page but then the link design changed. I was confused as to where I had
been before.
The news link took me to a new page, but the rest of the links after that were
not working yet. 
The look of the pages is very cheerful. Nice colors. Looks like it has the
promise to be useful and informative. Lots of advertising on the pages that
might take you away too soon. Might want to put those kinds of things closer
to the exit!
I only looked at the table layout and such of one page (Tripod address kept
popping up in the URL so I'm not sure what page it was). The entire content
was enclosed in a table when it didn't really need to be. The page had to wait
until that whole table was read before anything appeared in the browser.
Keep at it, looks like you are having fun.

EAP
NN4, MSIE3, AOL

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