Dancing Mouse Critique?

by Ray Dittmeier <ray(at)dancingmouse.com>

 Date:  Fri, 02 Jan 1998 17:38:56 -0500
 To:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
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Would appreciate comments on http://www.dancingmouse.com.  It's Yet Another
Free Web Graphics Site, mostly a personal page for me to play around with.
To comply with the "say so if it's commercial" policy, I make it known on
the page that I'm available to do business (just because... well, why
not?), but otherwise don't do anything to promote that part of it.

Anyway, comments about anything you feel worth mentioning are welcome, but
I'm especially interested in...

...navigation.  I want to make sure my setup is easy to understand.

...bandwidth.  I'd like to put as many images as possible on each page, but
without overdoing it.  Can any of these pages stand to have more graphics
without making you want to pick up a copy of "War and Peace" to pass the
time while it downloads?

...home page.  I've been trying to find some way to arrange the elements
into a clean, simple, uncluttered page.  What's there now is the the layout
I like best among everything I've come up with so far, but I'm still not
entirely happy with it.  Comments?  Suggestions?  Do I have too many little
buttons down at the bottom of the page?

Thanks,
--Ray

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