Re: Please Critique
by Ray Dittmeier <ray(at)dancingmouse.com>
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Mon, 05 Jan 1998 16:38:49 -0500 |
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hwg-critique(at)hwg.org |
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At 10:46 AM 1/5/98 -0700, you wrote:
>Hi!
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>I've had this site critiqued while it was still under construction. I
>have now completed it and all links should work (I hope! :-)
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>If you would please critique it again I'd really appreciate it.
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>Rielle's Sailormoon Extravaganza!tm
>http://rielle.simplenet.com/SailorMoon.html
I like the layout and organization of the pages. Nice and clean, easy to
follow. The character sketches are fairly well-written. One little
nitpick, though--"high school" should be two words.
One question and one minor problem...
Is Sailor Moon one or two words? Or can it go either way, depending on
context?
Also, I found the blue-on-blue color scheme made the pages a bit difficult
to read. It was okay for the page titles simply because of their size, but
I didn't like it for the text. I got through a few pages with little
problem, but after a while, it started to bother me. Under normal
circumstances, I don't think I'd put out the effort to read much on a site
with a color scheme like this--or if I had a pressing reason to read it,
I'd probably end up reloading it with my own choice of colors.
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