Re: S8 critique

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Hello,

The page loaded quickly, which surprised me. I was expecting to be 
going to Germany, not Compuserve somewhere in the U.S.A.

Are you allowed to have directories on Compuserve? If you are you 
could create an English and a German directory. Then give visitors a 
choice of which they want to see. Maybe a small link at the top of 
each page that says "German" or "English". The pages will look less 
crowded since I ignored the German parts on the page.

You've got a DocType and Meta keywords! Great! Now just validate your 
pages and you'll be in great shape. For more information visit 
http://www.hwg.org/resources/useful.html#2.0 .

On the ziefle_e.htm page, go ahead and put the link in the text on 
the right as well as letting us know which link on the left to click. 


The upaway.gif image (on ziefle_e.htm) was broken.

The pages look clean. For having two languages on most of them, they 
were easy to read. But I'd probably still split them into two pages. 

Viewed with Netscape Communicator 4.0, Windows 95, Pentium-133,
16MB RAM, 33.6 modem, 1024x768x256 color, Java/Javascript turned off.

I hope this helps. Michael

At 11:42 AM 12/19/97 -0500, you wrote:
>Hi all,
>
>this is my first request for a critique ... 
>... and I'm therefore quite fidgety.
>
>
>This homepage is about the genealogy of my family and ancestry 
research 
>in general. All pages are both German and English, so I think you 
will 
>prefer the english pages <g>. 
>You will notice some "Germish", means: poor English. Sorry for that. 

>Feel free to correct me with that.
>
>The last weeks I started redesigning the site, so please notice, 
that 
>especially the pages about the "Family Ziefle" look a bit different.
>
>The URL ?
>
>	http://ourworld.compuserve.com/Homepages/M_Ziefle/
>
>
>
>... eagerly awaiting any of your comments ...
>
>Michael Ziefle, Germany
>M_Ziefle(at)compuserve.com
>http://ourworld.compuserve.com/Homepages/M_Ziefle/

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