Re: Critique IBD site please

by "Funky Vibe Productions (Amanda)" <amanda(at)funkyvibes.demon.nl>

Date:	Wed, 03 Feb 1999 17:28:04 +0100
To:	skliro_l(at)mtn.co.za, hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
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http://www.mtn.co.za/lynn/

Hi,
Went to check out your site. It loads fairly quickly (I'm in Europe), so no
real problem there. I like the color scheme for the site and photos, in
tune with the Africa-content. Same goes for the yellow triangles on the right.

However, I think you need more graphics and more content. Esp. the
Objectives page is fairly useless as is. I don't know if you plan to add
more to this page, but I think you should.

As for the brochure pages, I haven't looked at the content really, but some
things you definitely need to change. The pages are not consistent in font
use (different size). Also, if every page has a theme subject, use a theme
index, instead of the page numbers as it is now. Makes navigation a lot
easier, and people can go directly to the content they're looking for,
instead of going page for page.

Hope this helps

Amanda.


Funky Vibe Productions
P.O. Box 349
9640 AH  Veendam
The Netherlands

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