Re: Constructive Critique - Commercial

Hi Tammi,

I am a beginner to critiquing although I can give you my personal opinion. The site looks very nice to me, the graphic on the first page "graphicsby.jpg" doesn't work,(there's a / in front of the string that doesn't belong there). Navigation is good, personally I like the graphics, pretty fast loading, very nice layout.

The only problem I had, is the red text. It is extremely hard to read.

Keep up the good work.

System

P/166

NC4.03

28.8

middle of the day (here)

David Levy





At 07:16 AM 12/2/97 PST, you wrote:

>Greetings fellow list memebers!

>

>I was asked to design a company's webpage.  They specialize in 3 major 

>areas, most of which I don't have data on as yet.  I am looking for some 

>constructive criticism and thoughts on overall navigatability and 

>design.

>

>Thanks in advance.

>

>The URL is:

>http://www.transworldtrade.com

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