Re: Review

-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE-----

Hello Jason/Lois,

It looks fairly clean and a good start. But there isn't any content. 
What is there about this school system? What schools? A List of 
teachers? Map of the school? Special classes taught? If I had a job 
offer and wanted to move to Kansas, what would I want to know about 
the school system they'll be in?

A comment (line 12) will have two dashes after the ! and at the end:

<!-- This is a comment -->
<! This is not >

I was going to ask why the text isn't lined up on the left edge with 
the margin, but then I saw your spacer gif. Why is this there at all? 
With the centered graphic, your text is off center. Also your <TD 
Width> statement is wrong. 

I found these 2 problems by validating your page. For more 
information, visit http://www.hwg.org/resources/useful.html#2.0 .

Viewed/surfed with:  Netscape Navigator 3.0 Gold; 28.8 modem;
Windows 95; 800x600x256 colors; java and javascript turned off.

I hope that helps. Good luck. Michael

At 06:04 PM 12/19/97 -0600, you wrote: 
>>>>
This is a site for a local high school and I was wondering what you 
thought of it.  Here is the address:  
<http://www.cjnetworks.com/~usd450/>http://www.cjnetworks.com/~usd450/

  
Jason

<<<<

-----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE-----
Version: PGP for Personal Privacy 5.0
Charset: noconv

iQCVAwUBNJ6nJ6iwZq7+2XlBAQESGwP/VW5RpTgjccjoJ9tYDtQjp/Xr3zW073TZ
Sda+lDG+6apGisAhx1QJ0rL99MEQqRV1mAozZnCzMWXrKm+l7WRu26sgorMMGoc1
WFHYxsZG5Bqkn39l0q0+ppOd2zU1jTDxuay5QAE2HsLgjpcoYVYryQj9QGsLT48f
ozxP8F6I6xk=
=mH7r
-----END PGP SIGNATURE-----


----------------
No unsolicited commercial e-mail please. Thank you.
----------------
Join the world's largest computer at http://www.distributed.net/rc5/ !
----------------
Michael B. Clark
http://michaelclark.home.ml.org/welcome.html

HTML: hwg-critique mailing list archives, maintained by Webmaster @ IWA