Re: Can someone check out my page...

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Hello,

1. Cut down on the animated graphics.

2. I thought your first image was a Link Exchange Banner until I saw 
the real one beneath it.

3. People generally are not going to send their work to you for you 
to display. They can get their own free Geocities web page and put it 
up for themselves. What you might want to do is to search the real 
world for things you'd like to put on your web page. And then get 
permission to do it. 

4. You need a space in "Thankyou".

5. Validate your pages. For more information, visit 
http://www.hwg.org/resources/useful.html#2.0 .

6. Three web rings on one page!?! Do you want to people to stay on 
your site at all? How about this: Copy your main.html page to 
main2.html and main3.html. On each of the 3 main pages, put one of 
the web rings. That will keep people from looking at two they may not 
be interested in.

7. I am glad I used NN and not IE3 because I didn't head the 
music/song.

Viewed/surfed with:  Netscape Navigator 3.0 Gold; 28.8 modem;
Windows 95; 800x600x256 colors; java and javascript turned off.

I hope that helps. Good luck. Michael

At 02:16 PM 12/20/97 -0800, you wrote:
>I have a homepage at http://www.geocities.com/Paris/LeftBank/1616
>
>it's topic is creative writing and poetry.  I was wondering if 
someone
>could check it out, let me know if all of the links are in full 
working
>order(especialy the frames version's image map).
>
>I know it is a little lacking in content, but that is because there
>seems to be very littl people that like to contribute work to 
webpages.
>
>thank you for your help,
>The_Oik
>Paris Community Leader
>http://www.geocities.com/Paris/LeftBank/1616


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