Re: Please critique a belated x-mas gift

Exelent work. (I dont say that often)
Your site is much improved over the original. Loosing the bg image was a
big help. Your graphics are clean and not over done. Even your js workrd
fine on IE. Thats rare. 
You might want to try to break up the catalog and field pages so they are
not so large. One way to handle this is by putting the main pionts on one
page and linking them to another with all the details. 
Download time was quick. I pulled down the pages on average in about 7 to
10 seconds.

IE 4.0
Win95
33.6 modem
800x600 16 million colors


At 01:43 PM 1/1/98 -0500, Matthew Breault wrote:
>Hello I am once again in need of your collective genius.
>
>I have redone a site for a paintball suplly store as a gift because they
>have wonderful customer service and thought it would be a nice thing to
>do.  Anyway I would like it to be critiqued on:
>
>1. Navagability
>2. Aesthetics
>3. Load times (I suspect on the 45 second area)
>
>The URL: http://www.koolworldweb.com/demon/bps/
>
>They also had there own site that can be found at
>
>http://www.bostonpaintballsupply.com
>
>If you compare I think the new one is better.
>This is a suprise gift so I want it to be good.
>
>Thank you.
>
>Matthew Breault.
>
>
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