DARK WORLD critique

Hey everyone,
I have a page that I'd like you guys to look at:

http://www.azteca.com/azteca/dworld/index.htm

I would greatly appreciate all of those who could scrutinize my site and
find any faults that may be contained within it. Please, feel free to "rip
it apart," you'll be doing me a great favor. Also, if you could, please
reply to me privatly. My email address is:

kylir(at)azteca.com

Thanks in advance,
	Kylir Horton

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