RE: Single Page Critique

by Alpha Witch <alpha1(at)atel.net>

Date:	Sat, 25 Jul 1998 22:27:31 -0400
To:	<webmaster(at)webwham.com>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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>I would appreciate having one of the pages in a new site critiqued.  The
>question my client has:  Is the photo positive or negative to the viewer?
>We both thought it was  funny but this is a commercial site and not sure how
>people will react.  Would sure appreciate your feedback on this one so I can
>get back to my client.  The URL of the page is
>http://www.balneotherapy.com/therpy.htm

Greetings, Sandy!!

I love the image on the front page ... it looks like they are all having
lots of fun!! :)

Ummm ... I couldn't help but look further into the site ... as it sounded
so interesting ... and I'd like to make a comment on the 'women's' link.

This page, for those who just checked out the first page, <G> is about
women suffering with PMS, emotional ups and downs, sleeping problems,
bloating, etc., and the peat baths that will make them feel better. They
certainly sound wonderful!! :)

However, although I 'think' the caricatures of the witches are 'supposed'
to be humourous ... as I am Pagan ... I find these offensive, as I'm sure
someone who was Christian would find a caricature of Christ offensive.

This comment is certainly not meant to 'start anything' ... just an
observation.

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