Re: request for a critique

by Alpha Witch <alpha1(at)atel.net>

 Date:  Fri, 22 May 1998 19:20:00
 To:  Frances Stewart <fstewart(at)med.navy.mil>
 Cc:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
 In-Reply-To:  navy
  todo: View Thread, Original
Whilst stirring the cauldron on 05:11 PM 5/22/98 -0400, I noticed that
Frances Stewart didst utter the following:

>DEGRADABILITY. How does the site look if your browser doesn't support 
>HTML 4.0 and/or CSS (style sheets)?

Greetings, Frances!! :)

I'm the one with the dinosaur at home (Tandy 2500 SX, 13" monitor, Netscape
2.01 :) and for me it loads really quickly and looks nice and clean.

A couple of suggestions ....

- the coloured bars are just a 'tad' too long. If they were a bit shorter,
i.e. about 600 wide, then I wouldn't have the scroll bar at the bottom  of
my screen ... and that won't really affect the page's look

- on the "Nmcpchi.htm" page, the word 'The' seems to start at the end of
the green bar instead of underneath.

- for ease of navigation, I would suggest putting links at the bottom of
the pages instead of having to backtrack to the main index page

- I discovered that the graphic at the top of each page is a link to the
main index page ... but it doesn't say that ... actually ... you could
change that to a 'map' that connects people to the individual pages ...
which is what I 'thought' it would do!! :)

alpha (and the dinosaur)

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