Re: Personal Page Revision

Hi Matt,

Here are my thoughts:

- the white text on the red background is quite offensive! Maybe tone down
the red a little, make it a rich dark burgundy for a still-red effect
without the eyesore

- I quite doubt that this is your "permanent home" - hope you realise that
when you quit Monash, you lose your account

- Give your page a title to help the search engines

- That pink background on your main page clashes quite horribly with the
aforementioned red

- I think that's about it - just basically rethink your colour scheme. You
can be loud and not offend people's eyes.

Kind regards

Kersti in Melbourne
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