Re: CRITIQUE: The Casual Snapper

IE4, 800x600, Win95, 28.8, 14"

Amazingly cool site! I have to admit, I really did like the vertical
thumbnails!

Good HTML, nice mouseover effect. The font was a little small, but it was
still legible. I did enjoy the site and would like to see more I think. You
might want to put personal info followed by technical camera info and make
it obvious what info belongs in what category, like so:

The story:
    blah blah blah blah blah
    blah blah blah blah blah

Technique:
    blah blah blah blah blah
    blah blah blah blah blah

Content was good, just about right amount.Loaded relatively quickly, given
image sizes. The table border made a nice picture frame. That's about all
I've to comment on!

Good job!

Chris Messina
Sandstorm Publishing
http://www.sandstormpublishing.com
http://www.sandstormpublishing.com/thecloset



At 01:40 AM 2/8/98 -0500, f u s i o n wrote:
>
>
>Greetings, once again, campers.
>
>For the past week, I have been working on a personal
>project of my own. I decided to create a page of my
>photography.
>
>The page has a photo gallery of my backpacking trips
>to Pisgah National Forest and The Great Smoky Mountains.
>I have only added the images that I thought were best.
>I am *in no way* a professional photographer.
>
>Besides being a gallery of my images, it was an
>experimental page, for various reasons. I bought a scanner,
>and I have been learning to use it. I have also been trying
>to learn Adobe Illustrator 7 <gasp/shrug>.
>
>I must note that some of the images in the gallery are
>pretty high-res., so, of course, they are going to be
>larger (nothing over 54k); also, I am *very* new to=20
>scanning (as noted above).
>
>So, if you could, please critique my new place, considering
>the following:
>
>[1] Browser, Resolution, O/S, Connection, Display Size
>[2] HTML
>[3] Graphics, Color, Layout, Navigation
>[4] Did you enjoy the site?
>[5] If I added more images, would you return?
>[6] Too much content? Too little? Was the content boring?
>[7] Too many images? Too little?
>[8] If you could change 3 things, what would they be?
>[9] What did you hate most? What did you like most?
>
>If that was not enough categories, please feel free to add
>as much as you like :)
>
>As always, I would appreciate anything you have to say.
>
>"Pisgah National Forest: The Casual Snapper"
>URL: <http://www.ais-gwd.com/~fusion/pisgah.html>
>
>Thank you,
>
>Brian J. (aka b.j.) =20
>
>
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