Critique For: http://www.rit.edu/~pjbpro/Red.htm
by David Gauer <gauer(at)ratfactor.com>
||Thu, 13 Aug 1998 15:18:40 -0700
>Any thoughts on spicing it up would be nice.
>No flames because it's so basic...thanks.
Actually, I wonder how flames _would_ look on your page... He he.
Well, for starters, I think you might do better with a background color
other than the default grey. My guess is that you are using a 4.0 browser
and didn't even notice it. I forget that all the time when I'm making a
page I want to be white.
Right now all of the text goes across the whole screen. I think that
perhaps if you use some tables (I'll admit I've got a fetish for tables) to
place blocks of text in strategic places on the pages, it might add a
little spice to the text. It would also be an artsy typographic move.
I wonder what a background with just a little bit of a red gradient on the
left side would look like? Something like this:
http://ratfactor.com/beta/red_gradient.htm for example.
Also, I noticed that the link to the RIT Pluralism Site on your services
page gave me a 404 error. Right now the link is "www.rit.edu/~020awww".
If you change that to "http://www.rit.edu/~020awww/index.html" it should
fix the problem.
Other than that, I think it's refreshingly minimalistic.
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