Please critique a UK Grammar School Site (11-18 year olds)

Hi,

Could people have a quick look around the following sites:

http://www.rmplc.co.uk/eduweb/sites/brgs/

This is the "official" web page of the school. I did not design this site,
but was asked to comment on it by the headmaster (=principle). The comments
I made were passed on to the actual webmasters. Needless to say there were
differences. If you could have a look, and send any comments to me, or the
site webmasters - you have to find their email address yourself.

http://www.fortunecity.com/victorian/hillcrest/146/#TOP

This is an unofficial site that I run. It obviously has a lot less to say,
and is very much a lightheated set of pages, that I just threw together,
until the official site went live.

At the end of the day I just want my old school to have as good a site as
possible.

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For those that do not know a British grammar school is a selective (state
funded in this case) secondary school for 11 to 16 year olds. The school in
question has a sixth-form added, which functions very similar to a US
high-school - it teaches 16-18 years olds in preparation for University
entrance.

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Thanks in advance.


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 Adam <adam_trickett(at)bigfoot.com>
 BRGS Web & Ring Master

 http://brgs.home.ml.org/  or  http://www.darwin.ucr.edu/ajt/
         

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