Re: Please critique personal site

by Mike Mann <mmann(at)internetx.net>

Date:	Fri, 20 Nov 1998 16:25:03 -0500
To:	"Rajnish Bhaskar" <9705228b(at)student.gla.ac.uk>, hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
In-Reply-To:	ac
	todo: View Thread, Original

Here's my thoughts
Windows95
Pent 233 mmx
800x600 res
16 mill colors
T-1 access
You might want to shrink down the liog to the entrance page (the dove). On
my machine it loads ok but not everyone has a t-1. The mouse over on the
same image might be a little much. It's been run in the ground (imho). It's
ok on menu items or the like, but it just looks like it was done for the
sake of doing it.
The backgrounds on your pages needs to be toned down. It's hard on the
eyes. The bg and the text on the "About Me" and Amiga pages are too close
in color. You really have to strain to read it.
The peace, and Rantings pages are a bit drab. Add some graphics or try
another layout using tables.
Sorry if this sounds negitave but I've got a monster cold and I'm ready to
go home.

At 06:32 PM 11/20/98 -0000, Rajnish Bhaskar wrote:
>Hi all,
>	I mailed a while back asking for a critique but got almost no 
>responses (thanks Tony!).  So I'd thought that I'd ask again.  
>Please critique:
>
>http://come.to/rajbhaskar
>
>redirected to:
>http://www.gla.ac.uk/Clubs/WebSoc/~9705228b/
>
>Thanks all in advance.

Michael Mann
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