Re: Critique Request

by chimbis(at)bahnhof.se (=?ISO-8859-1?Q?Martin_Skj=F6ldebrand?=)

Date:	Sun, 12 Apr 1998 14:36:53 GMT
To:	saint(at)cheerful.com
Cc:	hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
References:	cheerful
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On Mon, 13 Apr 1998 20:28:43 -0700, you wrote:

>Please visit my site The Twilight Zine and tell me what you think:
>
>http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/7171
>
>A friend mentioned that she got some gibberish. Does anyone else have
>the same experience? Can somebody tell me what's wrong?
>
>Any other comments are most welcome. And while you are there, enjoy! :-)

Me thinks the gibberishy part is on your page2.html.
Two text (?) sections following the "night gallery" section and one
below Dilbert. The links seems to work though.

Otherwise I would change the background which IMO makes text hard to
read.

M.

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