Re: Commercial Critique please

by "Lindsey Elizabeth Milton" <poof(at)photobooks.photobooks.com>

Date:	Sat, 3 Oct 1998 00:02:33 -0400 (EDT)
To:	duo-ditton(at)bigfoot.com, hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
In-Reply-To:	gateway
	todo: View Thread, Original

Hello,

Doo wah ditty ditty dum ditty doo.. 
Critique of http://www.duo-ditton.co.uk

1) You should eliminate (or move) the planet graphic at the bottom of the
page (home page). It forces me to scroll down, about an inch, when there
isn't anything further to see.

2) Does the yellow circle have a purpose other than interesting filler? It
is distracting me from the content of the page.

3) The load time was quite long, for such a simple site. The graphic
"Exceptional Value" seems unneeded...

I will revisit later... just a quick critique.

Lindsey



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