RE: please critique

by Virginia Blalock <skatefan(at)visions.simplenet.com>

 Date:  Mon, 11 Jan 1999 00:24:21 -0600
 To:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
 References:  genesisnetwork
  todo: View Thread, Original
At 09:34 PM 1/10/99 -0500, Nelson E. Timken, Esq. wrote:


>Perhaps they should have two "critique" sites, one for people of beginning
>and modest abilities and ones who want to hear their site critiqued against
>professional sites costing many thousands of dollars.

Well, that could be also a third for those of us with $0 budget<g>. Now,
onto your site:

I would lose the "under construction" stuff. Every web site in existence is
under contruction.
I cannot speak to load time because my connection right now is crappy.
However, with what I see on the page I think it is a fast loading site.
Like someone said, a more descriptive title would be nice. At least the
name of the company in the title would work.
I think overall this is fine for your aformentioned time and budget
constraints. I would also use smaller type. 


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