Need a Web site review

Hi all,

Oh, I can't belive I wrote down the wrong address the first time. I apologize 
for wasting your time and thank you to the folks who wrote to tell me the URL 
was wrong. Here's the correct one:

http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Loft/3300/index.html

Any criticisms are welcome. In case you missed my earlier post, this site is 
about to go live --as soon as I get revised content from the client. 

Best, Deborah Ager

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