Re: Another site for you to review ...

by Jack Tumlin <jack(at)twsolinc.com>

 Date:  Mon, 09 Nov 1998 20:37:08 -0600
 To:  "Tracey" <web_design(at)start.com.au>
 Cc:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
 In-Reply-To:  paq
  todo: View Thread, Original
Tracey,

Let me start off by saying you have a eye for unique images and color.

I do have a couple of suggestions:

1.	You might want to consider putting links for each of your pages on every
page.  There were a    	couple of times where I had to click twice. Make it
easy for your clients.
2.	On your main.htm page the images seem to clash. Just a little.  The
image that starts off with 	"a showcase for your talent"  stands out from
the background.  Maybe extending the image 	across the page to include the
"Services" and "Clients"?
3.	You might want to consider getting your own domain name if its in your
budget.  If this is your 	business site.  Makes it look more professional.

Your animations are nice and fit in with the web site.  I enjoyed looking
at your unique images.

Best of luck! :)

At 10:12 AM 11/10/98 +1100, you wrote:
>Hi all,
>
>I'd like to get opinions on my site at
>http://www.users.fl.net.au/~paq/webdesign/
>
>its half commercial half not (the web design part is, the rest isn't ..)
>
>anyway .. would love to hear what others think
>
>Kisses to all (does that affect the review?)
>
>Tracey
>
>
>____________________________________
>***** Life is but a dream *****
>
>web_design(at)start.com.au
>http://www.users.fl.net.au/~paq/webdesign/
>
>

Jack Tumlin
Tumbleweed Solutions, Inc.
Jack(at)twsolinc.com
<http://www.twsolinc.com/>http://www.twsolinc.com 

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