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At 11:39 AM 2/23/99 , nineto9webdesign(at)mindspring.com wrote: >Hi, I'm new. I came to this list to improve my site. >www.9to9webdesign.com Hi there! First, the background has a lot of empy space to the right since your buttons don't take up a lot of space. I would think about making the border less wide. It would give you more room on the right for content. Is the opo-up window required? If not, I would take it off. Lots of folks don't like them. Perhaps if there is a rate you can pay to remove it, consider that. On the ORDER page, there is some scrolling on my 800x600 display. Perhaps you can make those text areas smaller. On the portfolio links, I would add a target to the frame so that the loading will be on a completely new browser window instead of your frame. That way people can look at the URL and bookmark it if they want. On the whole it looks fine, but looks more personal. If you want your business to be mainly designing personal sites, then no biggie. If you want to attract businesses, you may want to think about making your site look more "professional" and less "homey." Good luck! Virginia's Visions http://visions.simplenet.com
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