Re: Critique

by Charlotte Gardner <vgardner(at)mindspring.com>

 Date:  Fri, 13 Aug 1999 21:02:03 -0400
 To:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
  todo: View Thread, Original
>From: "Kathy" <ksiddall(at)attcanada.net> 
>Subject: Critique
>Please have a look at http://www.marlintravelpg.com. It is a small site. I 
>am concerned with load times and ease of navigation.
>Thanks :-)

Hi Kathy,

I like the overall look and feel of the site. Very clean and nice layout. 
Interesting pictures, too.

My suggestions:

- Make the menu items more prominent -- maybe graphic text instead of
  HTML text. My first impression was that it was a one-page site because
  I didn't really notice the menu. I think my eye was drawn toward the
  pictures on the opposite side... Also I'd keep the main menu choices the 
  same on each page (ie. Home, Itinerary, Contact). 

- Itinerary page: I'd have an introductory intinerary page that links to all
the
  individual date pages. This way, people don't have to scroll to the bottom 
  to see the date they want.

- Contact page: One telephone number is bold, the other is not. Is there
  a reason? Also, one number is separated by all dashes, the other not.
  I'd have the same format for both numbers and maybe label them. 
  Side menu - "Itinerary" and "Home" are not the same font.
 
HTH,
Charlotte

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