Re: Critique
by Charlotte Gardner <vgardner(at)mindspring.com>
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>From: "Kathy" <ksiddall(at)attcanada.net>
>Subject: Critique
>Please have a look at http://www.marlintravelpg.com. It is a small site. I
>am concerned with load times and ease of navigation.
>Thanks :-)
Hi Kathy,
I like the overall look and feel of the site. Very clean and nice layout.
Interesting pictures, too.
My suggestions:
- Make the menu items more prominent -- maybe graphic text instead of
HTML text. My first impression was that it was a one-page site because
I didn't really notice the menu. I think my eye was drawn toward the
pictures on the opposite side... Also I'd keep the main menu choices the
same on each page (ie. Home, Itinerary, Contact).
- Itinerary page: I'd have an introductory intinerary page that links to all
the
individual date pages. This way, people don't have to scroll to the bottom
to see the date they want.
- Contact page: One telephone number is bold, the other is not. Is there
a reason? Also, one number is separated by all dashes, the other not.
I'd have the same format for both numbers and maybe label them.
Side menu - "Itinerary" and "Home" are not the same font.
HTH,
Charlotte
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