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Re: Critique for New Siteby Kym Jones <kjones(at)adam.com.au> |
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Rick... Great site. I like the color scheme and I really appreciate well made original graphics. The only niggling little thing that I would pick on is the line of text underneath the top banner. It's really hard to read and I'm having trouble making sense of it...I think you might need a comma in there. Should it be: "The best from the past, the best of the present & the best that will be (comma) come together on the eighth day" ....and Mz Spellchecker also found a spelling error...wouldn't ya just know it !! hahaha on the pricing.html page...you mention "maintainence" ...it's maintenance. Unless, it's an American spelling of which I am blissfully unaware. Kym FoJo Media - for Creative Web Design and Marketing Services *NEW*...Be sure to visit the "Samples Gallery"...*NEW* http://www.fojomedia.com Visit my garden to enhance your website with FREE graphics... http://www.angelfire.com/biz3/makinwaves/garden.html A tribute to my Mother who recently passed away http://www.geocities.com/BourbonStreet/Bayou/4441/tribute.html
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