Re: Critique of http://www.foreverteddybears.com/
by Tamara Abbey <tamara(at)abbeyink.com>
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Sat, 19 Aug 2000 21:08:19 -0500 |
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"Nancy Whittley" <jnwhittley(at)fuse.net>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org> |
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At 03:58 PM 8/19/00 -0400, Nancy Whittley wrote:
>Critique request of "Retail Online Store".
>I am looking for a critique of http://www.foreverteddybears.com/
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>What I am looking for is:
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>1. Is navigation clear or confusing?
Not very clear since a pop window appears as soon as the page loads. Now,
I'm connected tonight at a whopping 26,400, but there are a lot of text
gifs that took some time to load.
I know the scooters are this year's *thing* but what has that to do with
teddy bears? Ditto on the Cosmo thing.
Am I at Shop4You or TeddyBears4Ever?
Nancy, I'm really not trying to be cruel -- but the beige pinstripe is a
nice start -- otherwise, there's not a lot of bears when I first hit the
page or anything *teddy* about it.
15-inch monitor, PC running Win95 800x600
>2. Is there scrolling and at what resolution? ( I know there is some)
It's cutting the scooter in half and I'm getting three of the Dolls entry
on the navigation menu.
>3. What do you see wrong with the site, in other words what could
>we do to improve it?
If it's really about bears, where are the bears? I see one listing for
mohair bears that's repeated twice.
>4. Would you buy from here? If not why?
No, I'm not a bear or *gifty* kind of person, but if I was looking for
something for someone who did collect bears, I don't think I'd find it
here. You asked for my opinion by posting to this list, but I really thing
a *bears4ever* site should be more about the teddy bears and less about
scooters.
>5. What would help trigger that purchase mode in folks?
More bears -- softer, cuddly colors -- graphics that would show the fun of
collecting bears.
FWIW anyway ~
Tamara
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