Re: little check if you would

by Tamara Abbey <tamara(at)abbeyink.com>

Date:	Mon, 28 Aug 2000 07:11:12 -0500
To:	"Robert Swist" <bobswist(at)mailandnews.com>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
In-Reply-To:	pavilion
	todo: View Thread, Original

Robert,

>I just finished a flashed version of my portfolio and would like some
>feedback:
>
>http://www.freespeech.org/continue/portfolio/

NN 4.5/Win95/15-inch monitor, 800x600 res

I tried twice and Netscape crashed twice.

So, I tried IE 5.0 --  I was viewing your resume and then this slightly 
smaller screen pops up and has *Loading* for a while. Then it tells me I 
don't have the plug-in for playing the page. Hmm, thought I did. Anyway, if 
I was an employer, I don't think I would have waited even this long.

Oh, wait, here it says if I can see the animation, then continue.

Sorry, in my opinion, this is very annoying.

I see you still have that odd, floating navBar. I can't remember if the 
striated background is the same or not, but this floating nav on the 
striated background is still very unsettling to my eyes.

You have the talent to make things happen on a screen. I still think you 
need to direct it better.

FWIW,
Tamara

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