Re: http://www.emilydunn.com/

Craig hi,

Nice mouseover effect on your buttons and nice background.

Something occurs to me and please, this is just my opinion. When it comes 
to choosing a piece of artwork, it's a really personal thing. I think by 
putting that one big "painting" up there you are doing her a disservice. 
Obviously, she's a very talented young lady, but I have to admit that that 
face skeered the living daylights outta me LOL.

What I'm saying, I guess, is that she may very well have something in her 
collection that I would fall in love with on sight, but if the first one I 
see doesn't appeal, then I'm not going to look any further.

Maybe you could have a selection of thumbnails in a bordered table or on a 
nice background in the center to really show off her work up front. Of 
course, if you did that, you would have to reduce the size of your buttons 
or it would all look the same...hmmmm

Just my 02 cents....

Kym

At 02:27 AM 25/10/2000 -0400, Craig T. Harding wrote:
>Hello fellow members. I just need a quick look-see at a page that I'm
>doing to hold my step-daughter's personal portfolio. Just the front page
>is up and it's not really finished. None of the links work, but I just
>would like to see if there's anything dramatically wrong as seen by
>others or if anyone might suggest a more appealing way of displaying
>this. Thanks in advance.. the URI is http://www.emilydunn.com/
>
>--
>Craig T. Harding BS MS - Association of Computing Machinery ACM
>Institute of Electronic and Electrical Engineers IEEE
>President - GuideNet, Inc.



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