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Hi Bev:

I enjoyed visiting your site and reading the stories.  Most of the pages=20
loaded extremely quickly.  The Blue-on-light-purplish text is legible and=20
not annoying.  And I liked the graphics as well.  They made me feel --=20
peaceful, thoughtful.  (I am fond of the color blue.)

I looked at it using Netscape Communicator 4.5 on a Win 98/speedy=20
machine/cable modem/1024x768.

I think there are some problems with “ and ” on a number of=20
pages.  For example:

Wasted Time

Nasruddin, ferrying a pedant across a piece of rough water, said something=
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ungrammatical to him. “Have you never studied grammar?”, asked=
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the scholar. “No.”, replied Nasruddin. “Then half your=20
life has been wasted.” A few minutes later Nasruddin turned to the=20
passenger, “Have you ever learned to swim?” “No.=20
Why?”, asked the man. “Then ALL your life has been wasted =96 we=
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are sinking.”

Science Experiment

When the Mulla was a science teacher he liked to conduct this rather=20
strange experiment: He would freeze some water in a mould in the shape of a=
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jug. When frozen, he would then quickly fill this “jug of ice”=
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with water, place it all in the ocean and watch it disappear.

--Emily
                               Emily Berk
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