Re: please see my page

Hello,

I tried to look at your site but unfortunately it is just a blank page for me
using Netscape 4.02 @Home version 1.2.

So I then decided to try using Internet Explorer 4.0 and got there.  I don't
want to be harsh with my critique but your site can barely be navigated.  Let
me start out with a few questions...

Why would you have an opening page with just four buttons, when those same
buttons could be included on your home page and your other pages so people can
move back and forth within the site?

Also why would you have the link for each button open up in it's own window
and then not have any navigation controls on the new page?

It looks as if you have a very good message to share with others but unless
you improve the navigation of the site folks will get frustrated and leave.  I
would have normally checked out your links but with the problem I had
navigating I felt it was better to let you know about the navigation then I
will check it out later if you make adjustments to the site.  I also did not
check out your source code so hopefully someone else will critique that for
you.

On a very good note your graphics loaded quickly - but I have a T1 cable
connection to the internet so I may not be the best person to go by for that.
The site looked really nice so I think if you change the way the site is
navigated you will have a nice web site.  

I wish you the best of luck!
Jenny Czawlytko
Jen's Creations
Member of the 
HTML Writer's Guild

133 MHz Pentium with 48 MB RAM
T1 Internet Connection
MSIE 4.0 & Netscape Navigator 4.02
17" Monitor set at 800 X 600 - 32 bit color

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