Re: critique request: http://yearinparadise.com

by bkrWeb Services <bkrweb(at)bkrweb.com>

 Date:  Sat, 07 Apr 2001 19:44:19 -0500
 To:  Jonathan Watterson <jonathanjo(at)mindspring.com>,
<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
 In-Reply-To:  mindspring
  todo: View Thread, Original
WOW!!  Loads well, colors look great, normally I don't like white on dark 
but it works great, navigates well, I'm ready to go!!

The only other comments I have are truly nit-picking.  At least three 
(besides the Christmas page) pages have the title "Christmas in the Keys" 
(Buy the book, critical acclaim, & tell us what you think).  I have done 
this too many times to count.  On the tell us what you think  page the left 
bar is toward the center of the page.  On the other pages, it's off to the 
left.  I think it's good to keep it consistent and in the same place.  Like 
I said -- nitpicking.

Kathie Riechmann
bkrweb(at)bkrweb.com


At 02:31 PM 4/6/01 -0400, Jonathan Watterson wrote:
>Could y'all please critique this site?
>
>http://www.yearinparadise.com/
>
>It's a site to promote and sell my client's self-published book.
>
>TIA,
>
>J
>
>--
>Jonathan Watterson, Web Warrior
>http://jonathanjo.home.mindspring.com/

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