Re: Looking for input

by Seth Wilschutz <swhwg(at)neo.rr.com>

Date:	Thu, 05 Sep 2002 12:28:55 -0400
To:	"Scott Smith" <wahikan(at)megapathdsl.net>
Cc:	hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
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(Regarding: http://www.wahikan.com/)

19" Monitor, 1024x768
Windows XP CE, Internet Explorer 6.0
Cable Modem

Hello Scott,

I have to agree with the others that have critiqued your site thus 
far.  The color scheme is too dark.  Personally, I prefer about any 
background color other than black -- it's hard on my eyes and, usually, 
unnecessary.

I see the collages as a tie-in to the collages on the angel's wings, but I 
do not see the point.  In part, they are too blurry to make out, but more 
importantly, they do not seem to serve any purpose.

As for the good, I like the arrangement of the lines that make the footer 
of the page.  I think adjusting your color scheme and possibly working more 
with the graphics will go a long way toward improving the image and first 
impression of the site.

Only my two cents,
Seth Wilschutz
swhwg(at)neo.rr.com
sw

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