Re: critique please

Lori...

The dog in the logo really needs to be better. I like the visual concept 
but execution is poor. I don't know what the image was originally but your 
cropping is roughly done (too many straight lines) and the edges are too 
crisp leaving the image looking like it's pasted on the page. If you wanted 
to send me the original image I could better advise you. After moving 
around I see that most of the dog images have this same issue.

http://www.the-knickerbocker.asp/ & http://www.the-knickerbocker/ come up 
404... what's the dot extension?

The back to top links shouldn't move page content when you mouse over and 
that can be eliminated with your style sheet setting the line heights to 
equal values.

Other Stuff contains nothing that will motivate a potential client to do 
business with you so I would cut that page.

Way too much content on the home page. People are moving really fast when 
browsing and most are not interested in reading a 239 word ramble over 
several topics as soon as they arrive. It also gives your home page a 
boring text look detracting from any interesting visual concept you place 
there. I don't believe a home page should ever scroll down.

out of time
Steve
www.thewebguy.ca


At 07:36 AM 10/25/2002 -0500, you wrote:
>Please critique my site.
>
>http://www.lead-dog-design.com/index.htm

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