Re: Please Reveiw

by Shdowrks(at)aol.com

 Date:  Sun, 21 Jun 1998 00:00:41 EDT
 To:  dogger(at)junctionnet.com
 Cc:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
  todo: View Thread, Original
I can see some changes have been made since I last visited this site.  I
couldn't point out exactly the changes, but its  more organized.
I just read a critique suggesting your HTML was not up to par, so I ran a
couple of pages through W3C validator and web site garage for the heck of it.
Neither reported any errors.
(sample results:
>>>Here are the W3C HTML Validation Service results for the document at URI: 
 http://www.webpagedesign.net 
HTML Validation Results
Below are the results of attempting to parse this document with an SGML
parser. 
Version of HTML selected: HTML 4.0 Transitional. 
    No errors found!
            Congratulations, this document validates as HTML 4.0 Transitional!
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<)

Might want to run all your pages through, if you haven't already. 

There were no links back from the secure form at boutique.html

I can see where some future revisions might entail some simplification. There
is a lot of information "right up front".  Possibly have more focus on fewer
things right off the bat, spread the information out as the visitor gets used
to the site.  But that suggestion is to keep in mind for future revisions.
 This is the best version of this site so far.

Have fun,
EA
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shdowrks(at)aol.com
www.shadoworks.com

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