Re: Please check out www.clarinar.com

by DrDougFL(at)aol.com

Date:	Wed, 5 Apr 2000 13:48:34 EDT
To:	registrations(at)clarinar.com, hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
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Hello Heather,

Taking a quick look at your (AOL 5.0 browser) I found the appearance of the 
cell blocks around the navigational arrows distracting; more so with three of 
them. Perhaps link on the page to "Home" would eliminate one of the arrows.

Also, I would put the back arrow and the next arrow on the corresponding 
edges of the page with the text after and before, thusly:

<--- back to whatever page                                   forward to 
whatever page --->

I recently asked for help from this group at a site I'm developing 
(www.surfwebsite.com) and many of the comments and critiques were excellent. 
They lead to a total re-design and a less "cluttered" look; and I'm STILL 
working on it as well. So there is something to be said for "simplicity" .. 
but, do it with "style" (smile).

Sincerely,
Doug

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