Re: Please check site
by Shdowrks(at)aol.com
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Mon, 20 Jul 1998 13:54:52 EDT |
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http://www.cyg.net/~bandman/ <<<<<
>>>"The person I
have created it for... has definite
ideas about how the site should look"<<<<
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Excellent organization. Very easy to understand, and probably accurately
represents what the client wanted (thats a compliment... thats what it's all
about, ultimately.)
The background color of the page is white, while the page is loading. The
background image tends to "jump" at you once it loads. I might suggest
changing the "loading" background color to something a little closer to the
ultimate bg image. It will also bring the yellow opening text out - also hard
to read against the white.
A repeat of the Contact Info would be helpful at the bottom of the second
page. Just after the postal information, etc. Maybe a link back to the opening
page could also be included there.
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The animated clown on the start page lead me to expect a very different type
of product. Something more representative of the style of bands might be wise.
Someone looking for a "clown" thing would have to click on every link to find
nothing... someone looking for a more Scottish style may pass it by.
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Good luck,
EA
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shdowrks(at)aol.com
www.shadoworks.com
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