Re: Please critique

by David Voth <davidvoth(at)cheamweb.com>

Date:	Mon, 07 Feb 2005 19:23:16 -0800
To:	Janet Burgess <burgessj(at)post.queensu.ca>
Cc:	hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
References:	queensu
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The site does have a good overall look, though it didn't really stand 
out. It worked well for me in Safari and Firefox on Mac OS X. You might 
want to use an alternate bullet type on the 'Boarding' page: this can 
be done with CSS. I noticed that you make quite a bit of use of photos, 
which I think helps your site. As you develop the site that would be 
one area to focus on, cropping pictures so that the subjects fill the 
picture and making sure that they are sharp. The pictures on the left 
side of the 'Training' and 'Camp' pages look quite good.

David

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On 7-Feb-05, at 11:51 AM, Janet Burgess wrote:

> This is not quite finished yet, and we will be editing the text, but I 
> would appreciate some "first impressions" - is it too plain, colour 
> scheme ok?  etc.
>  http://www.corner-stone-farm.com/
> TIA
> Janet
>
>

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