Re: !st Timer looking for a critique : )

<<http://home.earthlink.net/~dixx/index.html>>

Oh my god, Im laughing out loud at this stuff! 
I plan to send the address on to lots of folks who I know will appreciate it.
I was on your site for almost an hour. 

I really like the illustrations. The images truly enhance the stories. 
 The animation  or "title" graphics weren't  bad, but the style of the
lettering (the "tube" or neon look) didn't really blend with the hand drawn
style of the other graphics. 

I read many pages and saw only one, possibly two typos.
staff_menu.htm ; glipse might should be glimpse
worried_moms.htm ; impatient treatment...? ?

Most of your links within the text on the client pages are directed to your
hard drive. 
 (file path-   file:///C:/frontpagewebs/dix/detox)
so getting "unable to find directory" message.

One personal note; 
"...feel free to look around, 
make yourself comfortable,..."
Maybe I'm jaded from seeing this on so many sites lately, but...
I've been seeing this on so many sites lately. 
/note


The site is very well organized and easy to navigate. Good job.

EA
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