Critique me pleeze

Shane,

I'm pretty new here, so you are welcome to disregard my comments completely.
I will be evaluating your site not as an expert, but just as an average web
surfer.

1.  Your first page is readable and everything looks neat and centered.  I did
not like being greeted with a howling cat and a message that AOL sucks.
Sometimes it does and sometimes it doesn't.  Anyway, I'm an aol user and not
about to change at the moment.

2.  The purple on black text is a little hard to read in the left frame.

3.  Family frame- You have a cute daughter.  Why don't you fix the text in the
right frame so that the reader doesn't have to scroll left and right to read
it?

4.  Same problem in the Role Playing frame. I'd rather not have to scroll
right and left to see the whole frame.  Maybe I need a bigger monitor. <G>
MaryLady

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